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在托福写作中取得高分的奥妙都有哪些呢?下面我们就一起看看托福写作加分的三大亮点。
  一、句式变化
  1. 变换句子的开头结构
  名词做主语
  介词短语作状语
  副词作状语
  状语从句
  分词短语作状语
  形容词短语作状语
  主语从句
  不定式短语做主语或状语
  动名词做主语
  To begin with, even in such areas as computer science, where it is estimated that much of what a student learns today will be obsolete in

just five years, an advanced degree and the education it represents will continue to be of benefit. Unlike undergraduate education, which is

divided into a number of small educational units every term, post-baccalaureate education is concentrated on deeper learning in fewer areas.

Moreover, most graduate education requires extended, critical focus on complex issues or research projects. And even if the technical

information relevant to completing a graduate-level project becomes outmoded, the learned critical methods and problem-solving approaches will

not.
  2. 使用不同的句型结构
  Today’s education system places too much emphasis on students’ desires rather than their needs. Accordingly, students are searching for

the easy way out, and educators are willingly conspiring with them. As opposed to this trend, I would argue that students should study what is

presented to them rather than what is desired by them. Not only should educators determine the curriculum, but also they should strive to

insure that each individual student truly gains from his/her education, rather than just breezes through it.
  二、承上启下
  1. 表示结论
  in conclusion
  in sum
  to conclude
  to sum up
  2. 表示肯定程度
  certainly
  clearly
  obviously
  plainly
  apparently
  surely
  undoubtedly
  naturally
  for certain
  for sure
  of course
  never
  always
  possibly
  perhaps
  likely
  probably
  potentially
  presumably
  to some extend
  in a large sense
  generally speaking
  in a sense
  generally
  in some sense
  normally
  ideally
  3. 引出新观点
  first
  second
  third
  finally
  in the first place
  in the second place
  last but not least
  first of all
  next
  another
  In addition
  additionally
  further
  furthermore
  moreover
  also
  likewise
  similarly
  more importantly
  imagine
  suppose
  most importantly
  for one thing
  for another
  4. 引出详细解释
  specifically
  particularly
  for example
  for instance
  in this case
  in that case
  as well as
  in that
  such as
  in addition to
  5. 表示对照或其他观点
  otherwise
  however
  nevertheless
  though
  although
  yet
  meanwhile
  while
  But
  instead
  still
  anyway
  unlike
  on the contrary
  by contrast
  by comparison
  in any case
  at any rate
  in spite of
  rather than
  on the one hand
  on the other hand
  even if
  apart from
  instead of
  even so
  6. 表示证据出现
  since
  because
  actually
  in fact
  as a matter of fact
  as a result
  due to
  owing to
  7. 表示推理
  as a result
  accordingly
  consequently
  hence
  thus
  ultimately
  thereby
  therefore
  as a consequence
  if so
  if not
  according to
  8. 表示反复说明
  in other words
  briefly
  that is
  三、巧用修辞
  1. 排比对称结构
  Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate weather global warming exists, how extensive the problem is, what the likely effects

will be and whether any remedy is possible.
  Despite all the evidence, experts continue to debate the existence of global warming, the extent of the problem, its likely effects and any

possible remedy.
  2. 比喻
  (1)明喻:比喻词出现:as, like, as if…
  In many ways, no doubt, our world grows more and more complex, sputniks cannot be simple; yet how many of our complexities remain

futile, how many of our artificialities false. Simplicity too can be subtle-as the straight lines of a Greek temple, like the Parthenon at Athens, are

delicately curved in order to look straighter still.
  (2)暗喻:比喻词不出现。
  America has given the Negro people a bad check, which has come back marked insufficient funds.
  3. 对照:加深印象
  Extremism in defense of liberty is no vice; moderation is the pursuit of justice is no virtue.
  4. 类比
  The Negro has a callus growing on his soul and it is getting harder and harder to hurt him here. That is a simple law of nature. Like a callus

on the foot in a shoe that is too tight. The foot is nature’s and that shoe was put on by man. The tight shoe will pinch your foot and make you

holler and scream. But sooner or later, if you do not take the shoe off, a callus will form on the foot and begin to wear out the shoe.
  It is the same with the Negro in America. That shoe-the white man’s system—has pinched and rubbed and squeezed his soul until it has

almost destroyed him. But it did not. And how a callus has formed on his soul, and unless that system is adjusted to fit him, too, that callus is

going to wear our that system.
  5. 拟人
  Dawn was beginning to prowl about the sky and put out the starts.
  6. 夸张
  For she was beautiful—her beauty made the bright world dim, and everything beside seemed like the fleeting image of a shade.