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分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一篇范文都经由专业团队反复校对,最终外教审查定稿。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。 [2023/ 7/ 29] The chart below shows the percentage of household with different number of cars in Europe from 1971 to 2001.
 【主体段分段】: <方法1>:按照时间分段(本篇文章采取此种分段方法) <方法2>:按照类别分段 【开头段】 The bar chart illustrates changes in the number of cars per household in Europe between 1971 and 2001. 【概述段】 It is clear that in the given 3 decades, car ownership increased in Europe. However, the proportion of families with two or more cars remained the smallest throughout the period. 语言点提示:生活化描述 思路要点: - 除了no car之外,其他两个类别上升→汽车拥有率↑ - 有多于2辆车的家庭比例一直 【Body 1】 We can see that in the initial year, roughly half of the families did not have a car. Although 40% of households had one car, it was uncommon for families to own two or more cars. 思路要点:年数据对比 - no car:大约一半 - one car:40% - two or more cars:数值非常低 【Body 2】 In the subsequent 30 years, the figure for families with no car was on a constant decline, falling remarkably to 30% in 2001. By contrast, the 30-year period witnessed a gradual growth in the percentage of households with more than one car to 30%. The proportion of one-car families climbed slightly to 45% in 1981, and then it overtook the figure for households without a car. After peaking at 50% in 1991, this figure saw a marginal drop by 10% in the final year. 思路要点:后续年份 - no cars:持续下降 - tow or more cars:逐步上升 - one car:小幅度上升→1981年超过one car→小幅度 |