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标题 | 3分钟学会一个雅思7分句(第92期) |
内容 | 应对 The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone. Do you agree or disagree? 这道题目 学生写了这样一句: What’s more, if people adore foreign businesses much more than native businesses, this poses a negative influence on our local brands, which is also the reason why some are not in favor of the opinion. ※ 借这个句子提醒各位小烤鸭一句,一定要注意措辞是否学术正式噢! ※ adore: 爱慕(某人)或很喜欢(某物)[informal] 教师修改后如下: What is more, if people favour foreign businesses rather than local ones, this is likely to have a negative impact on local economies. ※ 将非正式用词adore换成favour后,大家是否发现much more than也换成了rather than,原因在于favour本身不仅表示“喜爱”,它的具体含义是“更喜爱,偏爱”; ※ 句子中名词不重复,用ones替换,foreign businesses rather than local ones; ※ native (adj.) belongs to one by birth local (adj.) is from or in a nearly location ※ pose a threat/danger/problem 造成威胁/危险/问题 have a negative impact on 产生负面影响 ※ this is likely to 相较于this poses措辞更严谨,语气没有那么一定。 小总结: 中文含义很接近的单词,一定要区分清楚差别噢! |
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