应对 In many countries, it is convenient for people to buy a variety of food
from all over the world. To what extent do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages? 这道题目 考生在表态“利大于弊”后， 在文章第二段，是这样写第1句话的 There are two major advantages about this trend. ☆ 这样的一个简单句怎么还会出问题呢? 教师修改后如下 There are two major reasons why being able to buy food from around the
world is advantageous. ☆ 其实最关键的还是this trend，往往我们在开头介绍过“this
trend”的具体内容后，就会顺其自然默认为已知内容，从而在另起一段后还在使用“代词”，但这其实就“指代落空”了，那么，不妨把this
trend具体内容还是再写一遍吧! ☆ the reason why … 是定语从句常用结构 ☆ advantageous 有利的 adj.
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