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内容 | 如果手边有《新托福写作真经6》,请翻到Page 212。 ●写作范文 ● 今日一招: “别想了,举例吧”。 解读:抽象话题,没有具体的情景。于是,通过举例设置具体的情景来完成讨论。 “ Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success. ” 以【立场: remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important】为例,展示这一招: The essence of doing anything may not be attaining the desired goal but enjoying the process. 接下来怎么办?抽象话题,没有具体的情景。于是,通过举例设置具体的fail或achieve success的情景或者经历来完成讨论。 I have personally met many failures and successes in my study. To reflect on the many past achievements and disappointments, I find that those results did not really matter. What really mattered is how I managed to achieve a goal or what mindset I adopted in the face of being unable to achieve the desired result. As long as the learning, as the process, was productive and enlightening, I did not care about the grades, and it was being able to remain happy and optimistic when I failed that made the process meaningful. 注意:举例中,不一定特别具体的某个事件(比如,不是具体的某个presentation、experiment或者paper),而可以是一种宽泛的情况。 别急,还有福利。 如果我们【立场:remaining happy and optimistic when you fail is more important】,轻松复制这一招: Success creates a pleasure that is far more joyful and overwhelming than the happiness or optimism we have when we fail. 上一个演示段落里设置的具体的fail或achieve success的情景或者经历,简单调整就可以用来讨论另一个立场了,轻松、省脑。 I have personally met many failures and successes in the many examinations I have taken. To revisit the many past accomplishments and disappointments, I find that those good grades were way more enjoyable than the resilient mindset in the face of poor grades. This is best illustrated by a particular case that I failed multiple times in my attempt to pass the qualification test of being a nutritionist and eventually achieved a passing score and got the license in my third attempt. The joy was a feeling that is so strong that no optimism in any failure can create. |
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